Sunday, July 4, 2010
Wish I Could Bring "YOU" Back…
SHE cherished me in her arms,
When I stepped into this universe.
SHE kissed me with love,
When I opened my eyes first.
SHE revolted against my father,
To prove me right.
SHE opposed my mother,
To make me feel light.
SHE grinned with HER heart open,
Every time I dallied with HER.
SHE made possible,
Everything I asked for.
SHE sang me cradle songs,
When I never understood much.
Today when I can infer every utter,
SHE lies placid in her couch.
How could God snatch HER from me?!!
How could He lone me..!!
I had heard of His privation for eternal beings,
And this time it was my self-less Granny !!
I miss HER so much; SHE was indeed a unique creation,
My adorable Granny, will always be my divine possession !!!
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7 comments:
hey nice heartfelt yet strangely melodramatic...honest opinion
Lipsita....this is truly awesome writing....wonder why people leave what their heart wants to do and follow the herd...think again lady !!!!
@Shalil Sir. Thank you so much for your comments Sir.
Well, writing poems has always been my passion and HR my interest.
Injustice would have been done if I would have quit penning poems(which I havnt done).
And Sir, I always believe in following my Heart. :)
@Rij- Expert comments are always welcome lady :)
Amazing use of words to let out ur emotions... perfect is too less to say!
Awesome lips
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